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I left the scene of the crime completely unnoticed. It was a shock since my eyes were covered in blood, although the passerby might have just thought it as a bad makeup job.
It’s not my fault really. He just sort of impaled himself. Of course I pushed him, like a woman fleeing for her life. Maybe I was. He was suffocating me. Suffocating like a plastic bag over your head on a hot July day.
He didn’t deserve it. He was just confused. A lost wolf in sheep’s clothing, that’s all. I played god. God. God damn. God damn him. I’m supposed to feel horrible. All I feel is glad. I’m glad that it’s over. Glad that I never have to see him again.
When he lied it meant he loved me…
It’s not my fault really. He just sort of impaled himself. Of course I pushed him, like a woman fleeing for her life. Maybe I was. He was suffocating me. Suffocating like a plastic bag over your head on a hot July day.
He didn’t deserve it. He was just confused. A lost wolf in sheep’s clothing, that’s all. I played god. God. God damn. God damn him. I’m supposed to feel horrible. All I feel is glad. I’m glad that it’s over. Glad that I never have to see him again.
When he lied it meant he loved me…
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i like the first one better because of the cadence... it sounds more like the thoughts of a disturbed woman than the straightforward storytelling here. the constant return to a single thought makes it stand out, in my opinion.